Score: 8

"Huge Potential"

submission: Midwest Evolution

date: November 24, 2008

Keep your reverb down on the vocal track and try to match up your tones with the beat a bit more. Lyrics are dope though, your going places man

5/5

Score: 10

"ye ye ye"

submission: We Live On

date: August 31, 2008

Dude I'm feelin this beat a lot. No need for any string or brass, there are other ways to make a truly epic beat without the extraneous BS. You have a style that's your own........nurture your creative edge man.

-jhende

Score: 10

"No doubt"

submission: [C] Story of a King (Collab)

date: July 15, 2008

This track is something really special. I didn't know if you could match OTO but man, I think this track might just have topped it. The drums were structured in a simple manner, but there was also a uniqueness that you brought through with them. With OTO it was all about the fast snare, with this one you slowed it down. I think you teach a valuable lesson to aspiring NG artists- that drums are not an afterthought, and if you truly put the effort into them it really shines through.

Composition and mastering-well all I can say is stunning.

The synth however didn't sit right with me. I know you probably added it is a break, but it just sounded out of place.

And another critique..........you got me man this track is near perfection.

10/10
5/5

Score: 10

"A unbiased review"

submission: We Are All Forsaken (DEMO)

date: June 13, 2008

OMG I havn't even seen a loaf of bread that's as oven fresh as this beat. If I wasn't so busy stakin out turf in the ghetto with my homies I'd come give you a gold chain and a xxxl t-shirt. We should collab on some more hop-hip and I'll spit rhymes for fat hooks. All da ladies in da club will be nake to dis fat feat of musix.

Peace G and keep on keepin on keepin.

-jhende (white)

Score: 10

"Booooooooooooo!"

submission: Obliterate The Opposition

date: May 19, 2008

This is the first song I've heard from you on Newrounds, and one of the best songs I've heard on Newgrounds.

Now you leaving....

Good luck in your future endeavors!

10/10
5/5

-Jeff

Score: 8

"Coooool"

submission: Master Chief's Seizure

date: March 29, 2008

Little bassy in parts but over all i likey 4 and 8

Score: 8

"I get it"

submission: Club Entrance

date: March 27, 2008

I definitely see what you are doing with this song and could picture as the title proclaims as what youd hear entering a club. Try to work something out better for the bassy part at the start, you have it close but it's a little to disotrted

4'd and 8'd, fix up the intro and it would be a 5 and 10

Score: 8

"Interesting"

submission: Matrix Beats (HouseofSaws mix)

date: March 27, 2008

I think some of it was a bit overwhelming, but overall it was a very interesting and original creation

8'd and 4'd,

Score: 10

"Amazing"

submission: My Only Love

date: March 24, 2008

Intricate piano, and great notation, one of the top piano songs, whoever gave this a 0 knows nothing about music